tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-267121481205704808.post7782489413332033348..comments2023-05-19T05:56:01.063-07:00Comments on CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI SPECIAL: Carpe Diem's "Little Ones" #9, American Sentence (also 17 syllables)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-267121481205704808.post-11094756333642113342014-01-21T00:29:58.746-08:002014-01-21T00:29:58.746-08:00Hi.. I will put one out here shortly.. I think the...Hi.. I will put one out here shortly.. I think the important thing I bring from haiku is to capture a scene. Also the element of juxtaposition (often without a cutting word) to get an element of surprise is what I do... and yes sometimes a level of grittiness helps..brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-267121481205704808.post-75366881931585804212014-01-20T17:56:42.148-08:002014-01-20T17:56:42.148-08:00Tricky. Nature seems to have morphed to an urban e...Tricky. Nature seems to have morphed to an urban environment and the person is more present. They seem to be more like senryu...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-267121481205704808.post-88353255842706196362014-01-20T08:27:17.013-08:002014-01-20T08:27:17.013-08:00Very, very difficult. Well done. I don't know ...Very, very difficult. Well done. I don't know how Bjorn does them!PirateGunnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02619759991219830629noreply@blogger.com